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  1. Oct 28, 2006 04:24 AM #1
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    Last Dance

    Sonnet: Last Dance

    The stars are shining
    Tonight
    The moon's gleaming
    The sky is ours
    For tonight
    The masquerade ends
    Be ready
    The night will meet no ends
    No more procrastination
    Love me now
    Or hate me later
    Tonight
    I give you the last chance
    To save my Last Dance
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    whew! done... it's kinda lame.. however..^^ let me know what you think, ayt?

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    Re: Last Dance

    i like this its really romantic and reminds me of how it was for
    me a long time ago save that moment for the right moment it
    wasn't speacial for me but to most it is , and the poem really speaks
    of love in a way that no one really understands anymore, i loved this poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself
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    Re: Last Dance

    Nice poem it kinda reminds me of this famous poem called Tonight Tonight.
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