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    Re: Last Kiss

    very cool pome it reminds me of my last kiss
    *sigh* it was one of the harder kisses to stop
    because i wanted the moment to last but it didnt
    this poem really says alot about wanting something
    but never having it for ever.

    i loved the poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Last Kiss

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    very cool pome it reminds me of my last kiss
    *sigh* it was one of the harder kisses to stop
    because i wanted the moment to last but it didnt
    this poem really says alot about wanting something
    but never having it for ever.

    i loved the poem

    Thanks! HolderoftheDarkChalice (thats a mouthful =P) lol
    Glad you liked it =)

    not every couple can last forever
    and even though you love that person
    for different reasons you've got to let them go
    sometimes you just grow apart and the passion isnt there anymore
    but because you've been with that person for so long it's hard to say goodbye
    and sometimes they're called off to war and you just can't bear wait at home to find out they died so you let it go
    IDK
    it was really just the fact that you can say goodbye to someone you love even though you dont want to
    even though it hurts
    that made me want to write this

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    Re: Last Kiss

    The poem flows quite well and I like the topic that you chose.It is very daring and that is what makes your poem/song in my opinion,great.Thumbs up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by JefferyXie View Post
    The poem flows quite well and I like the topic that you chose.It is very daring and that is what makes your poem/song in my opinion,great.Thumbs up!

    haha your my new best friend ok?? lol
    thanks for the comment glad you liked it
    although I dont know if it could be a song .. lol
    maybe i just dont like the way it sounds when I try to sing it lol
    hahaha

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    Re: Last Kiss

    Nice poem KimiFemi. I really liked, did you write it based on your own experience or some else's experience?

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    Re: Last Kiss

    I loved this poem very much KimiFemi. It's very sweet. It kinda made me cry as fredsboo said.

    I hope to see more of your work! I defintnetly give you the thumbs up for this

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    Re: Last Kiss

    Well I'll be damned, this is a really good poem, perfect flow and good rhtyem, man hey keep it up and I hope to read more of your work.

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    Re: Last Kiss

    Quote Originally Posted by ketaro View Post
    Nice poem KimiFemi. I really liked, did you write it based on your own experience or some else's experience?

    thank you
    no it wasn't my experience
    was watching a movie where the couple broke up but stayed friends and it made me think of this ...

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