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    Re: Last Kiss

    Quote Originally Posted by KimiFemi View Post

    thank you
    no it wasn't my experience
    was watching a movie where the couple broke up but stayed friends and it made me think of this ...

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    Re: Last Kiss

    Quote Originally Posted by ketaro View Post
    Nice poem KimiFemi. I really liked, did you write it based on your own experience or some else's experience?
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    Your welcome, try reading mine, battle brings death though I don't think you could try to understand it lol.

    lol ok I'll try my hardest!
    *salutes* .. battle? I'll bring my gear! lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by KimiFemi View Post

    lol ok I'll try my hardest!
    *salutes* .. battle? I'll bring my gear! lol
    I sound kind a hateful of my poem though lol. so don't take worng of how I wrote it.

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    Re: Last Kiss

    A very sweet and romantic poem. I could imagine what the person must've felt like knowing it might be their last kiss. Great job
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    Awww. Sad. And sweet... straight to the point. I loved the poem. Keep it up ^_^ And I also like the topic you chose. Very interesting.

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    Re: Last Kiss

    Quote Originally Posted by CherryBlossom18 View Post
    A very sweet and romantic poem. I could imagine what the person must've felt like knowing it might be their last kiss. Great job
    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Awww. Sad. And sweet... straight to the point. I loved the poem. Keep it up ^_^ And I also like the topic you chose. Very interesting.
    Hey thanks you guys! I love it when people can understand the emotions behind the poem makes me wanna dance! lol

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    Re: Last Kiss

    I like it. Its very good. I felt what you mean.and you can kinda understand. I like it . Keep it up. and I hope to see more.(^.^)

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    Re: Last Kiss

    last kiss as a couple to the hands of freindship... hmmmm touching and sad, though you dont have to worry about it that much! if i ever gave you a kiss it would be for keeps to the end!
    anyhow i enjoyed the poem very much kimifemi, nice flow though some couldnt follow it i could. you know you got me and my heart from the start!
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