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    Last Moments of a Rose

    I apologize if this one isn't any good. I need to write, but can't piece much together right now. I hope whatever I can come out with, you will enjoy it.


    Sitting in the water.
    She knows I'm dying,
    yet she loves me with every moment,
    that is left in my life.

    My was meant for her.
    The beautiful lady,
    that smells my fragrance,
    every day as she passes by.

    I'm in a vase,
    sitting on her desk.
    The man she loves sent me to her,
    and thus I'm loved again.

    Just like he promised,
    He gave her a garden,
    and with thier,
    love it grows.

    I know.
    I was the rose from it.
    The season of roses,
    was nearly ended anyway.

    He saved me from the cold,
    and left me to live,
    just a few more days,
    in this home.

    I'm grateful.
    My last moments,
    will be of her smiling,
    and him smiling with her.

    I am a rose,
    planted from love,
    with love,
    to show love.

    I am a rose,
    and I'll not be forgotten,
    so long as the two,
    love each other so.

    White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Last Moments of a Rose

    aww that poem was so sweet and good and interesting and you are always a good poetry person so keep up the good work and hope to see more from you god job

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    Re: Last Moments of a Rose

    Kawaii! That was such a sweet poem... It reminded me of someone I thought I'd lost forever. *sigh* I feel like I'm a Rose too. (Cause that's my name. ^^ Really.) lol
    Hope to see more of your works.

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