yays ...i find this poem oddly interesting and funny XD
The last phrase caught me by suprise lol. All in all, great job
p/s my fav stanza is the 3rd one ^^
Last night I dreamt of an angel,
such beauty is one that no many beleive.
Such a pretty young woman, whom I'd stay forever faithful.
Our moments together, were sadly brief.
A sunset on the beach,
her skin a glistening gold color.
The cold and outer shell of mine, she was able to breech.
A magnificent being, whom with love you want to smother
Last Night I dreamt of an angel,
I almost faded away.
Is love truly untamable?
Is this a blessed day?
Last night I dreamt of an angel,
pearly white wings to save you?
None of that.
an angel...
a beauty...
dreams are interesting.
You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.
http://kuv319.tumblr.com/
There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
yays ...i find this poem oddly interesting and funny XD
The last phrase caught me by suprise lol. All in all, great job
p/s my fav stanza is the 3rd one ^^
Nice one bro. I like how you did that one. Your defiantely still keeping me on my toes. I like the whole thing, but the last line was indeed interesting.
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
This poem..is very nice. I like it. Keep it up!
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oh baby, your poems are always so special and full of life. and ya kno, dreams are interesting, lets wish that this one comes true for you.
love,
k
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Thanx guys for the comments..... and animechick, yea I also wish my dream could come true
You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.
http://kuv319.tumblr.com/
There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
Nice one man, you write pretty good poems like always.
I really like this poem sounds like a great dream^___^
like animechick said I hope that dream comes true![]()
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