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    I know if I think of you it will just hurt me.
    But I cant let you go and I dont think ill ever be able to.
    I lie to myself by saying ill be alright even thow im not.
    And I never will be!I wish you would come back.
    But you wont and knowing that brings me to my death!
    Thats all thats left for me so with this blade to my heart!
    The thoughts of you will hurt me for the last time!
    by leftinthedark aka nicole!

    sasuke is mine.

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    Re: last time

    it was ghood art least the way you were expressing.
    There are spelling erors and I geuss the qay it qas qritten qas not the best. But it is a good poem and has lots of feeling emotions.
    But yes kepp up the good work.^.^

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    yea im sorry im pretty bad a spelling and stuff like it but at least i try lol

    sasuke is mine.

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    Wow!!!!
    I loved the anger that you express in it......although it does have a hint of sadness also
    I loved it!!!!!
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    Oh... This hit me hard. Many times I have wished for my days to end... Just becuase I am sick of thinking, of hurting... Sick of be held prisoner by my feelings and thoughts of another.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    i know how you feel on that! thats why i write poems is because of it

    sasuke is mine.

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    this is a really good poem leftinthedark I liked it alot. Keep up the good work. :2thumbsup:
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    Re: last time

    a slice of remorse but your seeing the end of that road and continuing up another.

    In a persons life its best to move on through life when someone you love leaves you, otherwise you grow resentment of what couldve been, instead of what is!

    Aweosme job on this poem, one of the best ive seen tongiht.
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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