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    Otaku raja_psyche may be famous one day raja_psyche may be famous one day raja_psyche's Avatar
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    Last Will

    It's been a while since i made a poem. Feel free to post comments and critiques. thanks for reading

    Last Will

    Moments past by so slowly
    As the heart beats weakly,
    Images of random entities
    Encircles the half-awake mind.

    When death takes hold of my life
    Toss my cold body into the sea,
    Let the fishes consume the flesh
    Let my bones bury in the seabed.

    Shed no tears to me,
    Grieve not to my loss,
    Let a sincere smile be seen
    For my life’s journey will end.

    Burn everything I do own,
    Let my memories be unknown.
    Don’t hesitate to do my last will,
    Thus this grants me peace.
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    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Hmmmm. I get the sense of completion from the poem. Wonderful job.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Another pretty poem raja_psyche...It was very dramatic. I like your style...

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    @ Sensei Kasai: thanks for your comment, i really do appreciate it very much
    @Pride_Edward: yes, this poem is dramatic... heheh. thanks also for your comment. i really do appreciate.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    ...Very calm, but yet so meaningful... Great job...

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    Thanks for posting a comment, Sousuke. i do appreciate. ^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Your welcome... Always... Raja...

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    ^^ thanks again Sousuke ^^

    <<<< feels like dying... these past feew days...

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