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    Thanks also Ketaro for commenting on my poem. i appreciate it.

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    i love this poem Raja it really speaks of how
    things should be settled so there want be any after
    thoughts of the person gone sort of likea finle goodbye
    before they never comeback , and the emotions run deep
    for me in this poem because i have did this for a family
    memeber once and this poem really expresses how things
    should be done as a last request. very awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Thanks Chris for commenting also to my poem, i really appreciate it ^^ thanks again.

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    Wow and its been like six years, this is so nostalgic

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    That sounds good. Any thing but the same shit over again






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    Re: Last Will

    Quote Originally Posted by raja_psyche View Post
    It's been a while since i made a poem. Feel free to post comments and critiques. thanks for reading

    Last Will

    Moments past by so slowly
    As the heart beats weakly,
    Images of random entities
    Encircles the half-awake mind.

    When death takes hold of my life
    Toss my cold body into the sea,
    Let the fishes consume the flesh
    Let my bones bury in the seabed.

    Shed no tears to me,
    Grieve not to my loss,
    Let a sincere smile be seen
    For my life?s journey will end.

    Burn everything I do own,
    Let my memories be unknown.
    Don?t hesitate to do my last will,
    Thus this grants me peace.
    Nice to read quality poems...short and sweet, most of time those are the better ones. I enjoyed reading this, gave me some thoughts

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    Whoa, this poem is really giving me more to think about doing more into helping out the community in my town since i currently work for the county its always good to give a hand to when its needed. And i thank you for writing this inpiring poem.

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    Indeed. It was very lowly, and sad. It surely is not for the weak of heart. Either way it was good

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