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    For laughs only.

    A glimmer in the distance
    is all I see.
    It shines so bright
    Just what could it be?

    I move closer
    just to see what I will find.
    Will it be so damned stupid,
    or will it just blow my mind?

    The light glows brighter
    with every step I take.
    What the hell is it
    for goodness sake?!

    Step by step
    I make my way there.
    I am so tense
    and I fell like pulling out my hair.

    What it is?
    I have to know.
    WHAT THE HELL IS IT?
    OMG I MUST KNOW!

    A few step to go!
    I AM ALMOST THERE!
    O.o?? What the hell is this?
    A guy... sleeping... and he has no hair.

    His head is so shiny.
    All that walking for nothing.
    Damn damn damn DAMN!
    It was just nothing...

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    Re: For laughs only.

    It's not really my style of poetry I really get into, but it's different. There was a rhyming scheme, which is good. It's not that bad.

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