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    Laughter.

    this is the result of me being a lonely drunk and writing..

    laughter.

    Just ha!
    I feel no pain and shed no tears.
    I laugh at your emotional weakness,
    your misconception of realities gates.
    I weep at your distorted visions of pain,
    and detest you arrogant thoughts of death.

    You, you whine and cry and dramatize,
    but you’ve yet to realize,
    that through others eyes you’ve a surprise.
    When the rains swell and the earth shakes,
    and all that you’ve lost has been demolished,
    then will you see the pain and suffering,
    of deadened limbs and broken teeth.

    So your thirteen year old love abandoned you,
    so your father and mother curse and torment you,
    So what.
    When swollen stomachs in Appalachia go unfed,
    and Islamic treaties break as bombs pile high.
    Your pain and suffering is miniscule.

    So cut yourself to feel the pain,
    for but a scratch does it sting in your life.
    And claim broken mirrors in your eyes,
    for beauty and misleading false identities.
    Cry your tear drops of blood,
    as rivers of the same,
    pour in war torn countries.

    So ha!
    I laugh at your idiocy.
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    Re: Laughter.

    kinda funny, a good poem. would be better if all the lines rhymed, most comical poems do.


    unless that wasn't meant to be funny..... in that case soz.

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    Re: Laughter.

    This is Great! I love it because i've thought of that before allthough people will continue to do it because we're spoiled and if even the littlest thing goes wrong ppl wine about it. And this poem describes it, its idiotic. So love it! And keep the good stuff coming!
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    Re: Laughter.

    o.0... I don't remember posting that.... interesting...
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    Re: Laughter.

    it was a pretty cool poem and difrent persppctives is how people show there
    feelings and emtions,this poem was great in showing this, love ths peom
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Laughter.

    i think it was very good. you got your point across that some places are spoiled and all we do is whine about the simplest thing that goes wrong. we need to open our eyes to the truth and you did a good job of doing that.
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