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    Laughter

    I hear it everyday,
    I see playing yourself to be the joker,
    Becoming the master of masks,
    Professing in lies.

    Never thought you would be like that,
    Laughing everytime,
    Thinking it was happiness,
    But now I see it's just your jokes,
    Making me your puppet.

    Walking every step,
    Speaking every word,
    Doing everything you wanted,
    You took and took,
    Never giving back.

    The strings break,
    The laughter falls silent,
    The puppet no longer exists,
    I have my own will and life,
    Save your laughter for some other fool.

    random poem here. enjoy and comment

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    Re: Laughter

    0_0 Wow...very deep poem. Something bugging you Jason-kun?

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    Re: Laughter

    wow...not much else to say to that poem. I don't want to say it was said because there was something else more sinister to it. It was kinda depressing.But i really like it tho, so nice poem Blade.

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    Re: Laughter

    there's nothing buggin me. this is just a poem based on one of my friends experience. that's all

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    Re: Laughter

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X View Post
    there's nothing buggin me. this is just a poem based on one of my friends experience. that's all
    I thought that you were in pain or something. Dude that was a nice poem, keep it up.

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    I didnt like the feel of this poem. Puppets kinda scare me and thats what this reminded me of..
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    Re: Laughter

    i can relate to this poem alot in some ways
    and being a puppet or suing somone is wrong
    thoug most dont see it as useing it still is . and this
    really gets you thinking on how things should be and not
    how you want them to be . very awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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