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Dec 21, 2006, 11:59 AM
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  AO's Demon Slayer  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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 Credits: 1,446 | Laughter I hear it everyday, I see playing yourself to be the joker, Becoming the master of masks, Professing in lies. Never thought you would be like that, Laughing everytime, Thinking it was happiness, But now I see it's just your jokes, Making me your puppet. Walking every step, Speaking every word, Doing everything you wanted, You took and took, Never giving back. The strings break, The laughter falls silent, The puppet no longer exists, I have my own will and life, Save your laughter for some other fool. random poem here. enjoy and comment
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Dec 21, 2006, 02:17 PM
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Credits: 1,137 | Re: Laughter 0_0 Wow...very deep poem. Something bugging you Jason-kun?
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Dec 21, 2006, 02:34 PM
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Credits: 5,345 | Re: Laughter wow...not much else to say to that poem. I don't want to say it was said because there was something else more sinister to it. It was kinda depressing.But i really like it tho, so nice poem Blade.
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Dec 22, 2006, 05:06 AM
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Credits: 1,446 | Re: Laughter there's nothing buggin me. this is just a poem based on one of my friends experience. that's all
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Dec 27, 2006, 10:14 AM
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Credits: 1,595 | Re: Laughter I didnt like the feel of this poem. Puppets kinda scare me and thats what this reminded me of..
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Dec 27, 2006, 10:24 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: Laughter i can relate to this poem alot in some ways and being a puppet or suing somone is wrong thoug most dont see it as useing it still is . and this really gets you thinking on how things should be and not how you want them to be . very awesome poem |
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