A little bit recognition for my thinking.
For ruminating, or dismissing things completely.
If I can see it coming does that mean it'll miss me?
Thoughts without action should be nothing more than fleeting.
Thoughts without action are a bit misleading.
Actively we form our thoughts to give us what we're needing.
Let me give a bit of credit to the process.
Choosing, and deciding where to aim the thoughts at.
Believing I am receiving out of life based on this contact.
... Not Ever Again...
Interesting how attraction could ultimately bring forth thoughts that generate what we require the most. Not certain if this comment is best suited as it's late and I haven't commented on poetry for quite a while. Your poem is very short and sweet, and quickly goes to demonstrate itself. The third part of the poem feels a bit apart from the other two, as if you were adding your own thoughts to your observations. That's just about all I can think of for now.
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
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