Le grand retour

Whispered voices at my ears,
I realized i've fallen.
Drowning in my tears,
I can't deny what keeps me here.
All this time i've been so hollow,
But there's no time to feel the sorrow.

I will make you cry,
I will make you scream,
I will make you bleed,
Until you want to deceive yourself...
Until the day that you pray to die,
I will not rest,
When will it come that day.
More sooner than later.
I will make you suicide,
Because killing you wouldn't be so hard.

One cold night,
I woke up alone,
I don't know anything anymore.
I cannot remember my past,
what's my name. who am i.
will this insanity forever last?
Rain starts to fall,
i can feel the cold,
suddenly i feel so numb,
I'm aware that i bleed,
and i breathe no more.

Le grand retour

Slowly memories start to appear,
I killed you,
I killed them all...
There's no forgiveness for those,
that bleed but don't die.
There's no forgiveness for this soul,
that kills and feels no regret at all.

I finally understand you are nothing,
Nothing but the start of the day and the time,
when this noir âme was brought to life...

This is an excellent poem! how you express every detail... it seems to be like a story of hatred. It's exceptiomal. I just love it. awesome. jod work kurumi!

Really?? well thank you a lot for the comment. At least someone likes it...

I like it too! It sort of enlightened me since I am feeling a bit upset XP ... nice words keep it up!

thanx! appreciate it. I'm glad at least two persons liked it XD

hey!! finally i totaly understand this poem!!! late but i did! now i like it even more.. please write more!! T_T

Omg! This was sooo awesome KuRuMi!!!! :) I sooo loved this!! :) The detail that you put into this flowed great with the emotions. :) Awesome job once again KuRuMi!! :)

Woo your emotions expressed in each word in this poem(feelin a bit chill when read it^^)...
Very nice work. Keep it up:)