This is an excellent poem! how you express every detail... it seems to be like a story of hatred. It's exceptiomal. I just love it. awesome. jod work kurumi!
Whispered voices at my ears,
I realized i've fallen.
Drowning in my tears,
I can't deny what keeps me here.
All this time i've been so hollow,
But there's no time to feel the sorrow.
I will make you cry,
I will make you scream,
I will make you bleed,
Until you want to deceive yourself...
Until the day that you pray to die,
I will not rest,
When will it come that day.
More sooner than later.
I will make you suicide,
Because killing you wouldn't be so hard.
One cold night,
I woke up alone,
I don't know anything anymore.
I cannot remember my past,
what's my name. who am i.
will this insanity forever last?
Rain starts to fall,
i can feel the cold,
suddenly i feel so numb,
I'm aware that i bleed,
and i breathe no more.
Le grand retour
Slowly memories start to appear,
I killed you,
I killed them all...
There's no forgiveness for those,
that bleed but don't die.
There's no forgiveness for this soul,
that kills and feels no regret at all.
I finally understand you are nothing,
Nothing but the start of the day and the time,
when this noir âme was brought to life...
Last edited by KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR; Sep 18, 2006 at 11:44 PM.
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
This is an excellent poem! how you express every detail... it seems to be like a story of hatred. It's exceptiomal. I just love it. awesome. jod work kurumi!
I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD
Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
Colorful stylez
Really?? well thank you a lot for the comment. At least someone likes it...
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
I like it too! It sort of enlightened me since I am feeling a bit upset XP ... nice words keep it up!
thanx! appreciate it. I'm glad at least two persons liked it XD
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
hey!! finally i totaly understand this poem!!! late but i did! now i like it even more.. please write more!! T_T
I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD
Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
Colorful stylez
Omg! This was sooo awesome KuRuMi!!!!I sooo loved this!!
The detail that you put into this flowed great with the emotions.
Awesome job once again KuRuMi!!
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Woo your emotions expressed in each word in this poem(feelin a bit chill when read it^^)...
Very nice work. Keep it up![]()
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