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    Le grand retour

    Whispered voices at my ears,
    I realized i've fallen.
    Drowning in my tears,
    I can't deny what keeps me here.
    All this time i've been so hollow,
    But there's no time to feel the sorrow.

    I will make you cry,
    I will make you scream,
    I will make you bleed,
    Until you want to deceive yourself...
    Until the day that you pray to die,
    I will not rest,
    When will it come that day.
    More sooner than later.
    I will make you suicide,
    Because killing you wouldn't be so hard.

    One cold night,
    I woke up alone,
    I don't know anything anymore.
    I cannot remember my past,
    what's my name. who am i.
    will this insanity forever last?
    Rain starts to fall,
    i can feel the cold,
    suddenly i feel so numb,
    I'm aware that i bleed,
    and i breathe no more.

    Le grand retour

    Slowly memories start to appear,
    I killed you,
    I killed them all...
    There's no forgiveness for those,
    that bleed but don't die.
    There's no forgiveness for this soul,
    that kills and feels no regret at all.

    I finally understand you are nothing,
    Nothing but the start of the day and the time,
    when this noir âme was brought to life...
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    Re: Le grand retour

    This is an excellent poem! how you express every detail... it seems to be like a story of hatred. It's exceptiomal. I just love it. awesome. jod work kurumi!
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
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    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
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    Really?? well thank you a lot for the comment. At least someone likes it...
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    Re: Le grand retour

    I like it too! It sort of enlightened me since I am feeling a bit upset XP ... nice words keep it up!

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    thanx! appreciate it. I'm glad at least two persons liked it XD
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    Re: Le grand retour

    hey!! finally i totaly understand this poem!!! late but i did! now i like it even more.. please write more!! T_T
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
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    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
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    Re: Le grand retour

    Omg! This was sooo awesome KuRuMi!!!! I sooo loved this!! The detail that you put into this flowed great with the emotions. Awesome job once again KuRuMi!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Le grand retour

    Woo your emotions expressed in each word in this poem(feelin a bit chill when read it^^)...
    Very nice work. Keep it up

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