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    Learning

    Life is a roller coaster thrill
    Sometimes taking turns downhill
    Standing still looking for deals
    Don't know what to feel
    Sometimes the need to peel back layers
    We are in the game of life as players
    No revives no cheat codes
    Carrying heavy loads
    Lightening up to see the heaven sent
    Knowing the wrong and when to repent
    Pushing past the old and going anew
    Choosing the path of the few
    Life's lessons are hard learned
    Keep them because they have been earned.

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Nyc ..XD I like the last two lines and I like how you can rhyme so spontaneously =) .The last time I tried somethin lyk that I ended up with aridculous rhyme XD

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    Thanks I have been trying to get into writing and more English since its my worst subject so I'm glad someone likes it.

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    it doesn't look like it's yor worst subject lol , keep going after all practice makes perfect ^_^

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    Re: Learning

    thats pretty good i like your last to lines there kinda like something you can use as a quote out of your poem in a way if you want a some-what kinda deep quote it would be good as a life quote though
    "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"

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