Thread: Learning to let go

I do. It flows rather well and the reluctance and forlorness filters through really well.

I agree with Bratling it does indeed goes with the flow rather then going in your mind trying to confuse you but is indeed really hard to let go someone that you truly love someone but in the end you stay with that person no matter what the odds are there is always chance into forgiving someone for the cause for that. This is truly a wonder poem that just lets you think about it hope to hear more of this soon.

Thanks to both of you for your comments. ^_^

I'm glad to see that people like the stuff I don't like, when it comes to my work. I couldn't really tell where I was goin' with this poem while I was writing it, which is why I don't really like this one so much. But at least you two like it. I suppose that's all that matters.

Thanks again!

~S

Originally Posted by atomik_sprout

Thanks to both of you for your comments. ^_^

I'm glad to see that people like the stuff I don't like, when it comes to my work. I couldn't really tell where I was goin' with this poem while I was writing it, which is why I don't really like this one so much. But at least you two like it. I suppose that's all that matters.

Thanks again!

~S

Well no problem everyone in the community is here to support one anothers work in any way possible that way you cannot make any mistakes in the future as well being depicted on towards your goal in life that's how important the rules have been made for from the mods.