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    Fools behind and fight

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    And do not forget
    MY love is enternal

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    To only come back
    With the wounds
    From the battle you have fought

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    The memories that cause pain
    To live for today

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    To comment yourself to me
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    Re: Leave

    The poem reminds me of a soldier getting ready to to to war...he's telling himself to leave...or maybe it's a woman telling her husband to leave....that is the only way I can make sense of the last line.

    But it is a good poem by the way.

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    Thank you Soulidiumgirl, I wrote this to honor my sis who is in the military and in combat at the moment.
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    Re: Leave

    i think that it was a well written poem. and im sure your sister would love it. it reminded me of when my cousin went to war. it brought back some powerful memories. i really really did like it though...
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    Do not forget that we have love ones over there now.
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