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Reply With QuoteThe poem reminds me of a soldier getting ready to to to war...he's telling himself to leave...or maybe it's a woman telling her husband to leave....that is the only way I can make sense of the last line.
But it is a good poem by the way.
Leave
Fools behind and fight
Leave
And do not forget
MY love is enternal
Leave
To only come back
With the wounds
From the battle you have fought
Leave
The memories that cause pain
To live for today
Leave
To comment yourself to me
"How to draw a dragon: 'Cautiously approach the dragon, offer it a piece of candy or a little sister, and draw while it happily munches away.'" J. Neodragon Peffer
The poem reminds me of a soldier getting ready to to to war...he's telling himself to leave...or maybe it's a woman telling her husband to leave....that is the only way I can make sense of the last line.
But it is a good poem by the way.
Dragon Born (Mar 28, 2008)
Thank you Soulidiumgirl, I wrote this to honor my sis who is in the military and in combat at the moment.
"How to draw a dragon: 'Cautiously approach the dragon, offer it a piece of candy or a little sister, and draw while it happily munches away.'" J. Neodragon Peffer
i think that it was a well written poem. and im sure your sister would love it. it reminded me of when my cousin went to war. it brought back some powerful memories. i really really did like it though...
"May the force be with you"- Yoda
Do not forget that we have love ones over there now.
"How to draw a dragon: 'Cautiously approach the dragon, offer it a piece of candy or a little sister, and draw while it happily munches away.'" J. Neodragon Peffer
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