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    As I walk by the stairs in the schools lower hall,
    I can't help but see you leaning on the wall.
    I stop by to ask,"Whats going on?"
    But you just walk away, and like that you are gone.
    Every time you look at me, every time you walk by,
    I can't help but feel a butterfly
    Down in my stomach and also my heart,
    I wish you could know, I am falling a part!
    My feelings for you are mixed and confused,
    But if you go with me someone'll be used,
    For all of the time and all of the cause,
    I know you will notice all of my flaws.
    I just can't stop this feeling, no matter what I do.
    I feel so alone and lost without you.
    I need someone to mend my soul,
    I need someone to make me whole.
    I am just so lost and I need to know,
    Do you want me to stay? Or do you want me to go?
    But if I ask you, I know that you'll say,
    "Why don't you just leave and go away?"
    But thats ok, I guess I'll move on,
    And just like that I will be gone.

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    I have no idea how many times I felt this way about a certian someone when I was in highschool. (Minus the stairs part, there were none. LOL) But in the end I always found it impossible to just move on and be gone. Especially if it involved seeing next weeks flavor too.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I have no idea how many times I felt this way about a certian someone when I was in highschool. (Minus the stairs part, there were none. LOL) But in the end I always found it impossible to just move on and be gone. Especially if it involved seeing next weeks flavor too.
    its funny but every thing i write is absolutely for the most part true i have a high school ona hill and it is soooo annoying but the guy i liked would always hang right buy the stairs in the lowers floors (its a in door out door school so halls just seemed to ryme and a friend suggest ed it but that is how it happend

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    Even if it was creative license it'd have been cool. I really liked the piece. The whole feel.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Even if it was creative license it'd have been cool. I really liked the piece. The whole feel.
    thanks i enjoy writing even if i was to get a bad reply i don't think i would stop

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    very wonderful i like it i hope you continue writing poetry
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Quote Originally Posted by awesomeparty12 View Post
    very wonderful i like it i hope you continue writing poetry
    Thanks I plan to keep writing for a nice long time

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