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  1. Oct 23, 2007 08:00 PM #1
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    Leave... me... alone.

    Leave... Me... Alone...

    Not because I want you to.
    But, because I am not good for you.
    Because everything I say or do...
    ... I do and say with thoughts of him.

    A path walked together, is a road too tough.
    My heart can't love beyond this scuff.
    I do not love myself enough...
    ... for you to go out on a limb.

    If I told you I loved you, it would only be
    So that perhaps one day he'd see.
    That I too could love so easily...
    But, really... It'd just be a show.

    Do I love him anymore?
    A question I'd just as soon ignore.
    But I can't be picked up off this floor.
    So walk away from me... Just go.
    ... Not Ever Again...
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  2. Oct 23, 2007 08:03 PM #2
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    Re: Leave... me... alone.

    Wow... I mean... wow. Boy, do I know where your coming from there! Great work. It flows nicely and has alot of truthful emotion to it. Keep up the good work.
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  3. Oct 24, 2007 12:20 AM #3
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    Re: Leave... me... alone.

    yeah... wow.. nicely done again... outdone any of my works.. xD keep up the good work
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  4. Oct 24, 2007 03:00 AM #4
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    Re: Leave... me... alone.

    Ahh, a feeling I know all too well.
    This poem shows how a girl thinks how she is not good enough for her man, and could have self-esteem.
    It also shows her dilemma ... should she leave him? Will she ever good about herself?

    Very well presented.
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