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    Leaving Riga

    I wrote this in the plane when flying to London where I'm destined to live for more than four years now...

    One... two... three... four... five
    Minutes ‘till the plane takes off
    Fine minutes and I’m gone
    What will this bring in my life?

    Five… six… seven… eight… nine… ten
    Seconds for the plane to leave ground
    Ten seconds and I’m flying
    How beautiful this land is…

    Ten… eleven… twelve… thirteen
    Is how far I counted before we entered heaven
    The clouds about us, they blaze in the sunlight so bright…
    Where are the angels?

    Fourteen… fifteen… sixteen…
    How many days will pass?
    ‘Till I get home?
    ‘Till I meet you?

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Leaving Riga

    It's such as a very sweet poem ...
    I love it ...I love the count huh ...
    so you are here ...did you meet him \her ?*joking*
    nice ..keep it up...

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    Re: Leaving Riga

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    I wrote this in the plane when flying to London where I'm destined to live for more than four years now...

    One... two... three... four... five
    Minutes ‘till the plane takes off
    Fine minutes and I’m gone
    What will this bring in my life?

    Five… six… seven… eight… nine… ten
    Seconds for the plane to leave ground
    Ten seconds and I’m flying
    How beautiful this land is…

    Ten… eleven… twelve… thirteen
    Is how far I counted before we entered heaven
    The clouds about us, they blaze in the sunlight so bright…
    Where are the angels?

    Fourteen… fifteen… sixteen…
    How many days will pass?
    ‘Till I get home?
    ‘Till I meet you?
    OMG, I love this! This poem rocks my socks! ^_^

    I like how this poem speaks of your anxiety of leaving home and at the same time it tells us how much you love it there. Good work! ^_^


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    Re: Leaving Riga

    Thank You xxoxx!! ^^

    Yes, I'm there, but I did not meet him because he does not exist yet, maybe only in my mind... maybe I'll have to wait for years 'till I meet that speciall him... I just wrote 'till I get home and understood that my home is only where my true love is so I had to write that last line...

    The counting just somehow came into my mind ^^

    And thank You Sprout!!! I'm really happy to hear your comment with all the "rock my socks thingy" and to hear you love it is just such an honour!

    Here you might also find how sad I was to know that I might not be able to get on AO for quite a time...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Leaving Riga

    Well now that Im borrowing someones laptop, I have more internet access... Which means I'll be commenting much more on your work, so get used to it!^_^
    Anyway.. this poem was suspenseful, with the counting and all.. nice touch...
    It was exciting.. I felt like I was taking off with you!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Leaving Riga

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Well now that Im borrowing someones laptop, I have more internet access... Which means I'll be commenting much more on your work, so get used to it!^_^
    Anyway.. this poem was suspenseful, with the counting and all.. nice touch...
    It was exciting.. I felt like I was taking off with you!
    ^^ ok, nice to hear that... if only my inspiration to write poems came more often... I'm stuck with stories, whitch not many dare to read through, most of the time...

    To hear that you felt like taking off with me is the best thing I could hear with this poem... thank You very much Peach!!!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Leaving Riga

    Thats such an awesome poem!!!!!!!! I love it!!!! It could be such a cool song really so yah!!! And I love how you put numbers in it!!!!! Plus and it has such a cool rhythm if you put in a song!!! I love it!!!! GO GO GO LASURA!!!!! The COOLEST POETIC!!!!!!!!! <:~*Lasura*~:> Yah!!!! I hope to see more!!!!!
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    ^^ Thank You Kuwi soooo much!!!!!! Such a sweet and lifting comment you've writen there... made me smile... and blush... ^^ Thank You very much, I'm glad you like it so much...

    A song? *reds over* yea... maybe... lol

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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