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    Lesbian Earth.

    Uhhh.. what?


    Lesbian Earth.

    Listen to me as I breathe nonsense.
    Words flowing with reconnaissance
    Such trembling broken cactus arms,
    Which sting the beast of all harm.

    Broken glasses with pierced corneas,
    and bloodied noses with fake hernias,
    screams a fight of unlived lust for life,
    that break the silence of natures wife.

    O’ lesbian world of trees and frogs,
    mate the visions that creep from logs.
    Tree ridden lands now smoke and flame,
    fear the test of humanities game.

    Dripping skin of earths singed hair,
    a diluted cleansing that’s not fair,
    Breaking stumps of hill crested mountains,
    and sneezing out the fluid of natural fountains.

    Our tears drop into the soil,
    then slip through grains of foil,
    that protect and support the sky,
    but we continue to whine and cry.
    Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23

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    Re: Lesbian Earth.

    Interesting choice of words. I think this poem's about us messing up the world with our waste, and us bxtching about it,yet not really doing much about it.........We are stiil going the course of the wasteful consumer.
    I'm not good with critiques........So all I'm going to say is I like it!
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    Re: Lesbian Earth.

    like polluting the environment hmm nice poem i like it
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