Thread: let the blood flow(think about it most of the poepl in the world feel this way)

Hmmm.
I can see where you tried to go with the poem. It didnt really achieve anything for me. Not everyone feels that sort of... pain.

I TOTALLY AGREE! my heart goes out to you, i feel your pain!

You're right most people do feel this way and it's so sad. I hate to hear about someone trying to take their own lives over what is sometimes over nothing. Great job and I look forward to reading more.

The good ideas that didn't work,
the spinster who taught maths and Greek,
the boarded-up, what was once a corner shop,
those passing through, those who make do,
the well-established, the little palace,
the family home, the them and us,
the completely refurbished, the new build,
the closed National school, the wind
down entries, the instant sunlight,
the sound of music, the endless traffic,
the steel grid on the parlour door,
the dark street of solitary trees,
the monkey puzzle, the bulging hedge,
the cemented-over, the minimalist look,
the climbing roses, the hanging drapes,
the dickey-dy-do's, the rickety bed,
the flaking paint, the box room,
the rustle of a newspaper, a noise next door,
the snaps of mother and father,
the wakeful, the troubled, the early riser,
the timber floors, the young one's car,
ferns in the backyard, the rapid skies,
the original fittings, a shower of rain.

ummm...habte your suppose to make your own thread not on other people's thread-_-

Its an amazing thing, the human mind that is. How as humans we each have our own very different, very special way, of dealing with our emotional anguish. I feel your poem captures the rush of emotions that go through a person who would release pain in such a way...

- Ashe

thanks Ashe^_^
I spent two hours thinking of a name for the poem and it took me three hours to make it.