Thread: Let Go

Elie you are not thinking about dying right?

I hope the poem doesnt have implied meaning..........

Anyway, I loved this poem very much. It almost seems real (I surely hope not.....) The emotions were really extreme, and the words were very convincing. It was like, I just had to read as fast as I could to end the harsh words...... and the use of full caps on some of the words make it even more real, it even seemed like you were right here, shouting at someone.

The poem really captivated me fully. Although it was only for a brief moment, I felt part of the "scene", like I was really right there witnessing the pain and hurt, and anguish, frustration, all the other feelings mixed into this poem.

Last comment..... nice use of colour at the end. Red is a nice one to use, it was very supportive with the poem.

Lovely poem Elie

Hmmm..... I guess, its really hard to forget right? Hope you recover from the truth.....

*dancing in a circle* Go elie GO elie. No no. I like! Your right elie. I do like it. It's very cool. Tight work man. Your best.

I myself hope that this poem doesnt have some truth behind it you know I am your friend and always will be it has much anguish so much that I hope it does not bare a true meaning that you wish not to tell us about dont ever let go of the friends you have for you may lose everything that you earned

i realy enjoyed the poem! so did you make it or did you just copy it from some were!

This poem was awsome! Keep up making them cause they are awsome!