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Old May 03, 2006, 01:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Let Go

I discovered the horrible truth
All the fakes and lies beneath those smiles
I actually believed in you
Actually did, pouring my heart and soul out

I dedicated a poem for you
But all I ever got was the painful truth
I can't take the lies and hurt anymore
A person has their limit

Mine has reached
Here, take this poem as the last and LEAVE
All I've ever wanted was friends
But they turned out to be fakes

And now I'm gone
Never coming back again
Looking back I noticed
How foolish I was

Dedicating everything to you
Everything...
What's left are dust, dirt and ashes
Take it and go

I won't be there when you come back
No traces of me
Not a hair, DNA, or shoe
Get off me
I have nothing left to say

GO.
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Old May 03, 2006, 02:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

Elie you are not thinking about dying right?
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Old May 03, 2006, 03:31 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

I hope the poem doesnt have implied meaning..........

Anyway, I loved this poem very much. It almost seems real (I surely hope not.....) The emotions were really extreme, and the words were very convincing. It was like, I just had to read as fast as I could to end the harsh words...... and the use of full caps on some of the words make it even more real, it even seemed like you were right here, shouting at someone.

The poem really captivated me fully. Although it was only for a brief moment, I felt part of the "scene", like I was really right there witnessing the pain and hurt, and anguish, frustration, all the other feelings mixed into this poem.

Last comment..... nice use of colour at the end. Red is a nice one to use, it was very supportive with the poem.

Lovely poem Elie
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Old May 03, 2006, 03:47 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hmmm..... I guess, its really hard to forget right? Hope you recover from the truth.....
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Old May 03, 2006, 05:03 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

*dancing in a circle* Go elie GO elie. No no. I like! Your right elie. I do like it. It's very cool. Tight work man. Your best.
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Old May 03, 2006, 05:24 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

I myself hope that this poem doesnt have some truth behind it you know I am your friend and always will be it has much anguish so much that I hope it does not bare a true meaning that you wish not to tell us about dont ever let go of the friends you have for you may lose everything that you earned
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Old May 03, 2006, 05:34 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

i realy enjoyed the poem! so did you make it or did you just copy it from some were!
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Old May 03, 2006, 05:36 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

This poem was awsome! Keep up making them cause they are awsome!
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Old May 03, 2006, 08:26 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

wow that was nice elie26, that poem reminds me of how love is.
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Old May 03, 2006, 08:30 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

I like the poem, very deep!

How you made this line
Quote:
What's left are dust, dirt and ashes
As a group of three, made it more effective. And the endibg word, GO! Tied the poem altoghether in my opinion!
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Old May 03, 2006, 10:33 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Re: Let Go

The poem reminded me of a previous relationship that I had. Oh so sad, so sad. Good poem. Keep them coming.
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