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    Re: Let Go

    wow that was nice elie26, that poem reminds me of how love is.

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    Re: Let Go

    I like the poem, very deep!

    How you made this line
    What's left are dust, dirt and ashes
    As a group of three, made it more effective. And the endibg word, GO! Tied the poem altoghether in my opinion!

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    Re: Let Go

    The poem reminded me of a previous relationship that I had. Oh so sad, so sad. Good poem. Keep them coming.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Let Go

    wow tht sounds harsh for whoever this poem is for. But i like it, elie. U've written so well. Look forward to reading more.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Let Go

    That was really impressive do you have anymore or that was it

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    Re: Let Go

    Quote Originally Posted by silvebloodalchemist
    i realy enjoyed the poem! so did you make it or did you just copy it from some were!
    haha...no i didnt copy it frm anywhere....trust me^^ these are original work... and thx for the comments
    @every1- well, yes it was kinda true...KINDA(referin to the madness)....but tat was how i felt at the moment

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    Re: Let Go

    God, why you poems are so f**king touching...*sob* *sob*

    And now I'm gone
    Never coming back again
    Looking back I noticed
    How foolish I was
    This is very nice part, I personaly find this very touching cos' it reminds about myself.


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: Let Go

    Wow! Hardcore, Elie. Sealed emotions revealed, I presume. Compared to your other ones, this one really stood out, maybe because you drilled strong feelings into it. But, I hope that you have the strength to just move on, knowing a few of your friends were fakes. Be strong!

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