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    Smile Let me hear

    Let me hear
    Those silent notes
    That turn into ways
    Of telling you it's ok

    Let me hear
    Your beautiful voice
    As I dance the night away
    Melting in a way

    Let me hear
    The marvolous music
    Of Bach and Chopin
    Drifting me into peace

    But one thing
    Don't let me hear
    The whispers of my tears
    As you walk away

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    I hope you like it

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    Re: Let me hear

    i do like it.. it was beautifully written and i can't wait to hear more from you. ^^

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    Re: Let me hear

    wow...very good^^ nice emotions and describes happiness very well keep it up!^^



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    Re: Let me hear

    awww...so sweet and very romantic keep it ↑ also good emotions and describes your style very well^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Let me hear

    Oh my... *gasps* this was wonderful!!!! It really almost made me cry!!!! It's great!!! Why do I see that you've made only one post crazedfmafangirl? I want more!!!!! (

    It has a nice touch of feelings in it that made me hear music in my head and it made it seem to me that the sun shines brighter and at the end it just made tears burst into my eyes... great... I really want more.

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    Re: Let me hear

    agreed with laura and jamie.. beautiful indeed ^^ but a wee bit in grammar work would make it better keep up the good work ^^

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