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    Unhappy let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    no room to sprout my wings
    cramped no way to get out
    no matter how i scream and shout
    LET ME OUT!!
    let this nightingale spread her wings
    let this nightingale sing
    such beauty is not ment to be caged
    i want to soar the night sky
    so let me out now and watch beauty fly
    i want to flow free like my spirit
    i want to fly high
    to my home in the sky
    but i cant,
    locked in a cage
    FILLED WITH RAGE!
    Shippo is determined to become a lvl higher
    I'm a solider of Pen and Paper!
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    OMG Shippo! Its beautiful!
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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    wow that was better, a lot better than i expected i really liked it. continue to write for you have a gift
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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Great! I loved it! You're an excellent poet. I think this website is the most creative when it comes to poetry. I've seen websites with great poetry, but this is exceptional!

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    amazing this poem really toches my soul

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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Last paragraph was the coolest.. You're kinda good at making poems..
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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    cool poem Shippo. Keep it up .

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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    awsome shippo. this is really beautiful

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