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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    loved the fact that u juz used simple words and make it seem so gd ^_^
    in my opinion it seemed kinda enraged....and the ending seemed....uncomplete(reminds me of my work XD)
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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    this poem is more like an emo diary entry, nice one!! good job man.

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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    nice~!!!

    Shippo~!!!

    I do, I care for you because I can. I can because I want to. And I want to... because you said that I couldn't...
    Yet... Who... would love a demon like me...?


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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Cool bean's shippo. That was very good. What a poet
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    Heres one Of my poems I adore most:

    And their she was sitting in the middle of that field,
    I went up to her and didn't know what to say.
    She spoke..
    Her voice sounded like the chorus of a thousand angels,
    her hair like a beautiful stream of sparkling water.
    I mumbled,I stuttered trying to get the words out my my mouth.
    I I ...I love you...
    She got up and dissapeared in daylight,
    I saw her face in the clouds....
    with a twinkle in her eye like a star in the night sky
    she said,sorry but I can't stay for long,I've lived a happy life
    she grabbed me by the hand, and together as spirits we traveled through the havens..........
    Knowing we were going to step into another world...
    By Brandon Peoples
    A.K.A Shadowskin


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    -----------------------------Double Post Merge---------------------------------------------
    Heres one Of my poems I adore most:

    And their she was sitting in the middle of that field,
    I went up to her and didn't know what to say.
    She spoke..
    Her voice sounded like the chorus of a thousand angels,
    her hair like a beautiful stream of sparkling water.
    I mumbled,I stuttered trying to get the words out my my mouth.
    I I ...I love you...
    She got up and dissapeared in daylight,
    I saw her face in the clouds....
    with a twinkle in her eye like a star in the night sky
    she said,sorry but I can't stay for long,I've lived a happy life
    she grabbed me by the hand, and together as spirits we traveled through the havens..........
    Knowing we were going to step into another world...
    By Brandon Peoples
    A.K.A Shadowskin


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    Shadowskin

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    Last edited by shadowskin : Today at 06:27 PM. Reason: Automerged Dou
    Last edited by shadowskin; Jun 03, 2006 at 06:35 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
    *all art is born of suffering*

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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Wow awesome poem Shippo 101 I liked it lot Hope 2 read more of you work soon
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    wow impressive I never thought you can write poem like these really good

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: let me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    kool thats soooooooooooooooooooooo rocs
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    Hee! Hee! thanks for the comments. I feel this way when i am in school sike just kidding anyways you guys are all so sweet thanks again
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