Let Me Show You

forever a dreamer · Jul 18, 2006, 12:54 PM

So is this how you felt like?
So is this how you feel?
Like you’ve been stabbed with a knife,
And the wound will never heal?

Well, I’ve had little taste of that,
And I didn’t like it at all.
So I want to show you the light,
And get you back up from your fall.

I want you to feel the wind from a tree,
And hear the robin’s morning song.
I want to show you joy and hope
That you can treasure all life long.

I want to show you things you’ve never seen,
And things you’ve never done.
I want to cast away your sadness,
And give you a lifetime of fun.

I want to show you what it’s like to hope,
And that there are people who care.
I want to show you that there are other things
Than just your world of despair.

Let me show you what it’s like to live,
And what it’s like to love.
Let me show you just a little taste
Of what it’s like above.

Go on, take my hand.
Let me show you.

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jul 18, 2006, 12:56 PM

sweet peom here i like how your oferign your hand
to someone in need thats rare now a days its good to know
that people still do that even among kids like you it reminds me of how
awesome the young kids can be today if they put there hearts in to it
great poem

friend_of_fish · Jul 18, 2006, 07:11 PM

That is so sweet! knowing you outside of this comp I can really see how it relates to you

Shinigami's_Angel · Jul 18, 2006, 07:58 PM

Wow,Awesome.It's really sweet.I liked it.

Great job.

TaurusDemon23 · Jul 18, 2006, 08:03 PM

Ooooooohhhhh, making wounds open up again...............very,very touching......

Heartless_mage · Jul 18, 2006, 08:05 PM

thats is a nice poem i liked it

elie26 · Jul 18, 2006, 11:20 PM

W-O-W

Flow- tick
Meaning- tick
Rhyming- tick

Results- TICK, TICK, TICK!!! XD
It was a really meaningful poem with lotz of effort put into it i can see...Great job

HieisLove · Jul 19, 2006, 05:14 AM

I like it. Thinking about it, makes me think of someone special to me that wants to show me everything

forever a dreamer · Jul 19, 2006, 06:30 AM

i suppose that would make it easier, my fishy friend. haha. i'm glad to see that people like it and can relate. and holderofthedarkchalice, yeah i guess that is pretty rare today, but its how i was raised

thanks again everyone

celestial_angel · Jul 24, 2006, 10:17 PM

nice poem although it's a sad one...

forever a dreamer · Jul 26, 2006, 02:55 PM

hmmm, yeah, i guess it is- but thanks!

Jul 18, 2006, 12:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Let Me Show You So is this how you felt like? So is this how you feel? Like you’ve been stabbed with a knife, And the wound will never heal? Well, I’ve had little taste of that, And I didn’t like it at all. So I want to show you the light, And get you back up from your fall. I want you to feel the wind from a tree, And hear the robin’s morning song. I want to show you joy and hope That you can treasure all life long. I want to show you things you’ve never seen, And things you’ve never done. I want to cast away your sadness, And give you a lifetime of fun. I want to show you what it’s like to hope, And that there are people who care. I want to show you that there are other things Than just your world of despair. Let me show you what it’s like to live, And what it’s like to love. Let me show you just a little taste Of what it’s like above. Go on, take my hand. Let me show you. __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,797 Thanks: 21 Thanked 21 Times in 20 Posts Credits: 3,320	Re: Let Me Show You sweet peom here i like how your oferign your hand to someone in need thats rare now a days its good to know that people still do that even among kids like you it reminds me of how awesome the young kids can be today if they put there hearts in to it great poem __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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friend_of_fish Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Where ever I wanna be Posts: 48 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Let Me Show You That is so sweet! knowing you outside of this comp I can really see how it relates to you __________________ WHATISTHATBIGLONGBUTTONONTHEBOTTOMOFTHEKEYBOREDFOR !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,051	Re: Let Me Show You W-O-W Flow- tick Meaning- tick Rhyming- tick Results- TICK, TICK, TICK!!! XD It was a really meaningful poem with lotz of effort put into it i can see...Great job __________________
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forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Let Me Show You i suppose that would make it easier, my fishy friend. haha. i'm glad to see that people like it and can relate. and holderofthedarkchalice, yeah i guess that is pretty rare today, but its how i was raised thanks again everyone __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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celestial_angel Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: bEtWeEn HeAvEn AnD eArTH... Posts: 48 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 419	Re: Let Me Show You nice poem although it's a sad one...
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forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Let Me Show You hmmm, yeah, i guess it is- but thanks! __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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