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    Let me sleep

    well people have been making "those adult poems"

    so why dont i give it a try



    waking up at 2:00 am
    why did i wake up?
    but im just to sleep
    to get up and stand.

    I'm thinking about somebody
    in my first period class
    why cant i get them out of my head
    im getting warm i cant stay still in my bed.

    the next afternoon i talk to him
    i said "baby ive been loving you"
    im getting all tingly, really warm inside
    and i hope i dont trip on my shoe(lol)

    when i take him home
    i want to feel the soft kiss of his lips
    and hug him tight
    and be his miss.


    all this is a fantasy~

    __________

    hope you liked it pathetic though.
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Let me sleep

    Ooh.. i wonder what u been pondering...:rolleye1:

    Hmm a good poem..i suggest u make more description... ^^ that way the poem would show a better picture

    hah~! peachy strikes again her poem made another person inspired go peachy~! xD

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    Re: Let me sleep

    no i just wanted to see if i was good at it aperently im not so back to mine again

    oh well tnx though
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Let me sleep

    hmm well its not a bad poem but you could of made it better my putting rhyms in and a better description but i did like it, its just not my type of poem

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    Re: Let me sleep

    Not bad... But it could use more attention. Still, I think its one of the better works I've seen from you.
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    Re: Let me sleep

    i liked it ^^ tho it couldve used more descriptive words but none the less i enjoyed reading it ^^
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