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Reply With QuoteOoh.. i wonder what u been pondering...:rolleye1:
Hmm a good poem..i suggest u make more description... ^^ that way the poem would show a better picture
hah~! peachy strikes againher poem made another person inspired
well people have been making "those adult poems"
so why dont i give it a try
waking up at 2:00 am
why did i wake up?
but im just to sleep
to get up and stand.
I'm thinking about somebody
in my first period class
why cant i get them out of my head
im getting warm i cant stay still in my bed.
the next afternoon i talk to him
i said "baby ive been loving you"
im getting all tingly, really warm inside
and i hope i dont trip on my shoe(lol)
when i take him home
i want to feel the soft kiss of his lips
and hug him tight
and be his miss.
all this is a fantasy~
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hope you liked it pathetic though.
Yeah, Bye.
Ooh.. i wonder what u been pondering...:rolleye1:
Hmm a good poem..i suggest u make more description... ^^ that way the poem would show a better picture
hah~! peachy strikes again
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no i just wanted to see if i was good at it aperently im not so back to mine again
oh well tnx though
Yeah, Bye.
hmm well its not a bad poem but you could of made it better my putting rhyms in and a better description but i did like it, its just not my type of poem
Not bad... But it could use more attention. Still, I think its one of the better works I've seen from you.
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i liked it ^^ tho it couldve used more descriptive words but none the less i enjoyed reading it ^^
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