Let the nothing be.

bratling · Sep 28, 2007, 10:43 AM

Shh. Be quiet!
Don't let them see.
That deep dark,
Part inside of me.

They can't see the pain.
I won't let them do it.
They can't see the hurt.
THey put me through it.

Shove it down.
Learn to avoid.
Don't let a frown,
Let you seem annoyed.

If they can't see,
And you pretend,
Maybe it won't be,
So bad in the end.

The numbness sets in,
And you think that just may-be,
They'll let you win,
And let the nothing be.

*RayMe* · Sep 28, 2007, 10:46 AM

hmm..another dark poem... To me.. this sounds like another part of a person talks to them like advising or commanding.. lol ^^ good poem again..

keep up the good work ^^

bratling · Sep 28, 2007, 10:52 AM

THanks.... Well theres sorta two different parts of me. Theres the pieces and fragments I let everyone see. The people I meet in the day to day routine, the friends I have, the family I associate with. The people really close to me see glimpses of the other stuff but nowhere near an understanding.

Sep 28, 2007, 10:43 AM	#1 (permalink)
bratling Sugar sweet poison Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 516 Thanks: 0 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 12,880	Let the nothing be. Shh. Be quiet! Don't let them see. That deep dark, Part inside of me. They can't see the pain. I won't let them do it. They can't see the hurt. THey put me through it. Shove it down. Learn to avoid. Don't let a frown, Let you seem annoyed. If they can't see, And you pretend, Maybe it won't be, So bad in the end. The numbness sets in, And you think that just may-be, They'll let you win, And let the nothing be. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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Sep 28, 2007, 10:46 AM	#2 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,606 Thanks: 55 Thanked 27 Times in 24 Posts Credits: 59,502	Re: Let the nothing be. hmm..another dark poem... To me.. this sounds like another part of a person talks to them like advising or commanding.. lol ^^ good poem again.. keep up the good work ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Sep 28, 2007, 10:52 AM	#3 (permalink)
bratling Sugar sweet poison Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 516 Thanks: 0 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 12,880	Re: Let the nothing be. THanks.... Well theres sorta two different parts of me. Theres the pieces and fragments I let everyone see. The people I meet in the day to day routine, the friends I have, the family I associate with. The people really close to me see glimpses of the other stuff but nowhere near an understanding. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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