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    lets stay together forever

    i always walk without knowing what will happen
    i wondered if good things are likely to happen

    but in that night i saw you
    and it felt like daylight

    all my imotions
    all my feelings
    have changed in just that moment

    at the that time it was our first incounter
    at the that time we saw each other for the first time

    i should have went around
    before i felt down on the ground

    you came to help me
    you came to see me

    i could have said something to you
    i could have done something for you

    but i couldn't
    instead you knew what i wanted
    instead you did what desired

    i didn't know how to trust
    i tried before it turned into dust

    heavy thoughts forcing it's way out of me
    light words coming out of me

    at that night
    we stayed talking to each other talking to all night

    i felt a wierd feeling towards you
    i wanted to be there next to you

    all i ever wanted is for you and me
    to stay together
    forever.......
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: lets stay together forever

    i felt a wierd feeling towards you
    i wanted to be there next to you
    I like this stanza, it was a pretty good poem man, keep it up.

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    Re: lets stay together forever

    i wish i can copy his and give it to my ex
    its kinda i feel excatly like that rite now.. =//

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    I dont care I love it. Keep it up
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    Re: lets stay together forever

    people always wanting to stay together no matter
    the odd but they dont say a word of how
    the feel till the opther person is gone. never
    knowing if that person felt same as you but you
    know they do but they dont show it. more pople
    should be open with hw they fell very awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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