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    letter poem

    mess up the title, sorry.


    As I look into the moon lit sky, I see the stars shining bright.
    They look just like my angel's eyes, Dark and blue and full of light.
    The darkness holds me like your hands. Cold and soft like velvet.
    It was something that was oh so grand, like when we'd just met.
    I felt the cold let go of me, as it was almost dawn,
    I knew we'd never come to be, everything would soon be gone.
    Although we will never be,
    I hope you'll always remember me.

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    Re: letter poem

    I hope you have better reasons for loving that preson than being greatful that he doesn't hit you..

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    Re: letter poem

    well, i'm gonna change this poem . hope u'll come back and comment


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    Re: letter poem

    lots better

    huge improvement compared to the last one

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    Re: letter poem

    well, go check my pervious poems i have made, they r awesome! well, that's what others say.


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