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    Letting Go (this is my last poem)

    I feel so tired, so heavy
    Everyone around me sees a smile,
    But inside me I know I wont see them again,
    I cant seem to move or carry on.

    As I walk home for the last time,
    Say my goodbyes for the last time,
    There is confusion over why,
    But I know why and what will happen.

    The routine will be broken,
    I will be no longer be in a cycle,
    As I lay down for eternal rest,
    I must say sorry to those I made a promise with,
    I cant hang on anymore.

    My grip is slipping,
    My arms ache so much,
    I want to let go,
    As I close my eyes,
    I say thank you to everyone,
    Those who have shown me their love,
    Those who have supported me when I needed,
    Those who made me feel good.

    But it's not enough,
    I'm sorry everyone,
    I cant hang on anymore,
    Sorry for letting go.....
    Last edited by Blade X; Sep 21, 2006 at 04:56 AM.

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    Re: Letting Go

    The best of friends must part. Whether you leave or stay you'll always be remembered here. Believe it it's from my from my mouth >_>
    Nice poem, completely different from your others .... I dunno why.

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    Re: Letting Go

    Suicide poem. Liked how it sounded in my mind......would make someone's momma cry.....
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Letting Go

    wow blade this poem is trly hopless and fully of self pitty
    its awesomei could see my self saying that if i was husrt enoug
    or just tied of it all ,and just let it all go and fade away with a bullet
    or what ever i feel will help. i give this 10/10 for very cool wording
    and leaving the reader feeling sad and hopless ,great job i loved it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Letting Go

    Uh huh ... hey Taurus, at least a LOT of people would miss him! Unlike you, no one would care if you die

    *ahem* Back to tthe poem.

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    Re: Letting Go

    Still practicin your "Rave Grip" since your girlie left ya?
    Anyways, I call it as I see it....It was a suicide poem and I rolled with it....So what?
    Doesn't take away from the fact that I liked it.
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    Move Along.

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    Re: Letting Go

    She never was my "girly" to begin with ok no more ...

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    Re: Letting Go

    Jason Please do not~

    Please...
    ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤
    You know how you drown a blonde, Rosalie? Glue a mirror to the bottom of a pool.
    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
    Lamie Hynamen "I reject your reality and substitute my own."

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