The Lie!

1000 times i had your heart
somany times it feltso real
nothing really made that moment
specail so i lived a little lie and said
i loved you.

The days they lingerd on and the
smilesand the i love you's they seem
tomake it real when i deny it ,i pretend
to love you too, matters of the heart
there so confusing.

No matter the time of day i just cant
love you i live this little lie that turned
big some how never caring if it hurt you
because i faked it,the only times i cringed were
when you hugged me because i couldnt feel the
same as you.


You can live a million life times but still not
understand that love for me just can not
be because i just dont know how to love ,
call me blind or even incoherant its all just words
to me , because every moment i am with you
makes things a little hard but not so hard
i cant deny it.


Why love seems so easy to push away
i can not say , the tears you have when we kiss
make it harder for the truth to come out ,i can
say i love you for a millions years and still it wouldnt change
a thing because you cant love what was never there unless
its the shadow of something you wish was real.
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This poem is about love and how some use its power
to decieve and not reallylove anyone at all because all
they know is pain ,there are ways around this if
those who do lie or pretned to care actualy open
there hearts which is very hard for them.

comments and sugestions are welcomed

wow....
to tell you the truth...this poem is sort of consfuing to me...it hard to see the point that you are trying to make (and this is coming for the person that does not even write poetry...lol)
and also...you have a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes...
but the poem itself is very nicely done and it is beautiful.....
nice job!!!

thanks and i will work on the grammer
a bitmore but i did just fix what i saw
was wring with it so far but im glad you
did like it.

I like this poem alot 0_0.
Some aspects of it...got...well confusing.
But i'd give it an 8/10.
Keep on writing, and i'll keep on reading :D

thanks and sorry for the confusion i treid to
exaplin it but i will try and word it better next time
and i realy am glad you enjoyed it.

Wow...I can see what your were trying 2 say with this. How you let them believed that you loved them but didn't, it's heartbreaking for both sides. I really loved this.

Very sweet poem and so truthful. It's kinda sad how some people seem to pretend to love you knowing they're lying. I think you should never tell anyone you love them unless you mean it cause noone deserves a broken heart.