Lie

You came, you left
You love, you leave
You just can't see
What you have done for me.
Why?
Because, it was all a lie,
That is what you are.

oh ok..uhm short. lol but i guess thats the new style everyone's picking up but thats fine as long as you explain your main ideas. you should explain what she/he did that made you feel that they lied to you/main character. the flow was nice. ryhme scheme could've been better.

sorry me and my friend had a bet and the loser had to post some poems this is a poem dedicated to my asshole of a ex whose name I still protect. So um thanks for the comment but yeah I wasn't really going for much but what happened to make me feel this way was that I was used with the good old "I Love You" tecnic so um well thats it.

It's short...
But I like it..
It express your feelings in a short way...
More will feel that way...
But why do you still protect him..
If he is a asshole...
Something I dont get...

he made me feel like i acctualy mattered to the world and even tho i am over him i belive that the least i can do is protect his name

ah now I understand...
It's very sweet of you...
I would maybe do the same...
But I dont know...

ahh you never know until it happends...............