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    Lie

    You came, you left
    You love, you leave
    You just can't see
    What you have done for me.
    Why?
    Because, it was all a lie,
    That is what you are.

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    Re: Lie

    oh ok..uhm short. lol but i guess thats the new style everyone's picking up but thats fine as long as you explain your main ideas. you should explain what she/he did that made you feel that they lied to you/main character. the flow was nice. ryhme scheme could've been better.
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    sorry me and my friend had a bet and the loser had to post some poems this is a poem dedicated to my asshole of a ex whose name I still protect. So um thanks for the comment but yeah I wasn't really going for much but what happened to make me feel this way was that I was used with the good old "I Love You" tecnic so um well thats it.

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    Re: Lie

    It's short...
    But I like it..
    It express your feelings in a short way...
    More will feel that way...
    But why do you still protect him..
    If he is a asshole...
    Something I dont get...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    he made me feel like i acctualy mattered to the world and even tho i am over him i belive that the least i can do is protect his name

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    Re: Lie

    ah now I understand...
    It's very sweet of you...
    I would maybe do the same...
    But I dont know...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: Lie

    ahh you never know until it happends...............

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