Thread: The Lie You LIve

You tell the world how you
always follow the rule's never
allowing yourseff to stray always
smiling showing your vain side
constantly you never lend a hand
to those in need just turning you
head and thnking the world is perfect
not admitting the truth of what is really out there.

But i know the real you i have seen the inside
of your heart and its dark,dark like mine
never seeing the sun ,never knowing love, or
happy thoughts ,and your thoughts they are
distorted like the inside of my mind i know
what im saying because i am like that also
never careing, never thinking your always
walking on that water you claim is perfect.

I looked inside of you'r soul today and you'r
dieing,dieing inside love reject's you you thrive on hate
your emotions they are ugly so keep telling your self your
better for it I knowbetter than that life its going down hill
never realising its slipping away everytime you open your mouth
and you let lose those words of hate so i will let you fall
down from grace so you can see what the real world
is like,its not as perfect as you claim and then i will
smile when you finaly taste those tears you have been
giving everyone for all these years.

ok this another attempt at a poem i hope this one is a bit better
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give some feed back on this poem
i am trying to improve