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    Re: The Lie You LIve

    Well anyway, I liked it. Very true, I know too many people like that. Your sentences were ok with me and I guess I'm the only one that understands through your spelling but who cares. It was good either way. Guess I'm just used to it.
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    Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!! This person must be cold. Grammar is almost a 100%! And i love love love the feeling of it! Greatness! *bows*

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    I love the poem. It's cool how you get the words so right and make very good poems. keep it up.
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    Re: The Lie You LIve

    thanks everyone for the comments it means alot ,and i a glad
    everyone understood it. ,im still working with grammer and othetr thing but im still newe to poems so i will get better
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Wow!! Another awesome poem big bro! I sooo loved this! Your words spoke with such strong emotion,it was amazing! Awesome job as always big bro
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    Re: The Lie You LIve

    Great job on the poem. I really liked it. I know alot of people who are just like that. Keep up the awesome job you're doing and I look forward to reading your next poem.

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