HolderOfTheDarkChalice

You tell the world how you
always follow the rule's never
allowing yourself to stray always
smiling showing your vain side
constantly you never lend a hand
to those in need ,just turning your
head and thinking the world is perfect
not admitting the truth of what is really out there.

But i know the real you i have seen the inside
of your heart and its dark,dark like mine
never seeing the sun ,never knowing love, or
happy thoughts ,and your thoughts they are
distorted like the inside of my mind i know
what I'm saying because i am like that also
never caring, never thinking your always
walking on that water you claim is perfect.

I looked inside of your soul today and your
dieing,dieing inside love rejects you, You thrive on hate
your emotions they are ugly so keep telling your self your
better for it ,I know better than that life its going down hill
never realising its slipping away every time you open your mouth
and you let lose those words of hate so i will let you fall
down from grace so you can see what the real world
is like,its not as perfect as you claim and then i will
smile when you finally taste those tears you have been
giving everyone for all these years.

ok this poem is a bit odd for me as i tried to length
the lines a bit but not sure if i should have, anyway
this poem pretty much sum's up alot of people who
think there better than other's and one day they
will see the real world.

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CherryBlossom18

This poem really hit the nail on the head of how some people act. To me, no one person is any better than the other cause most of us are all the same inside,but different on the outside. I liked it cause it was truthfull and dark like most of your poems usually are. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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BlueFox1

Bro I need you to rub some of your poems on me I've been in a drought for the past couple of days! This is great and I agree with CherryBlossom that you hit the nail on the head!

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice

thanks bro i am glad you liked and i can give you a few idea's in a pm
i am always thinking about life and thats where some of my stuff
comes from because what could be better than a poem on how
life really is

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Sincere

Very cool poem. Yeah, there are plenty of those people out there. You do good work, can't wait to read more.

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A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums