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| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,212 | The Lie You LIve You tell the world how you always follow the rule's never allowing yourself to stray always smiling showing your vain side constantly you never lend a hand to those in need ,just turning your head and thinking the world is perfect not admitting the truth of what is really out there. But i know the real you i have seen the inside of your heart and its dark,dark like mine never seeing the sun ,never knowing love, or happy thoughts ,and your thoughts they are distorted like the inside of my mind i know what I'm saying because i am like that also never caring, never thinking your always walking on that water you claim is perfect. I looked inside of your soul today and your dieing,dieing inside love rejects you, You thrive on hate your emotions they are ugly so keep telling your self your better for it ,I know better than that life its going down hill never realising its slipping away every time you open your mouth and you let lose those words of hate so i will let you fall down from grace so you can see what the real world is like,its not as perfect as you claim and then i will smile when you finally taste those tears you have been giving everyone for all these years. ok this poem is a bit odd for me as i tried to length the lines a bit but not sure if i should have, anyway this poem pretty much sum's up alot of people who think there better than other's and one day they will see the real world. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,336 | Re: The Lie You LIve This poem really hit the nail on the head of how some people act. To me, no one person is any better than the other cause most of us are all the same inside,but different on the outside. I liked it cause it was truthfull and dark like most of your poems usually are. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,176 | Re: The Lie You LIve Bro I need you to rub some of your poems on me I've been in a drought for the past couple of days! This is great and I agree with CherryBlossom that you hit the nail on the head!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,212 | Re: The Lie You LIve thanks bro i am glad you liked and i can give you a few idea's in a pm i am always thinking about life and thats where some of my stuff comes from because what could be better than a poem on how life really is |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 364 | Re: The Lie You LIve Very cool poem. Yeah, there are plenty of those people out there. You do good work, can't wait to read more.
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