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    The Lie You LIve

    You tell the world how you
    always follow the rule's never
    allowing yourself to stray always
    smiling showing your vain side
    constantly you never lend a hand
    to those in need ,just turning your
    head and thinking the world is perfect
    not admitting the truth of what is really out there.

    But i know the real you i have seen the inside
    of your heart and its dark,dark like mine
    never seeing the sun ,never knowing love, or
    happy thoughts ,and your thoughts they are
    distorted like the inside of my mind i know
    what I'm saying because i am like that also
    never caring, never thinking your always
    walking on that water you claim is perfect.

    I looked inside of your soul today and your
    dieing,dieing inside love rejects you, You thrive on hate
    your emotions they are ugly so keep telling your self your
    better for it ,I know better than that life its going down hill
    never realising its slipping away every time you open your mouth
    and you let lose those words of hate so i will let you fall
    down from grace so you can see what the real world
    is like,its not as perfect as you claim and then i will
    smile when you finally taste those tears you have been
    giving everyone for all these years.

    ok this poem is a bit odd for me as i tried to length
    the lines a bit but not sure if i should have, anyway
    this poem pretty much sum's up alot of people who
    think there better than other's and one day they
    will see the real world.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Lie You LIve

    This poem really hit the nail on the head of how some people act. To me, no one person is any better than the other cause most of us are all the same inside,but different on the outside. I liked it cause it was truthfull and dark like most of your poems usually are. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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    Re: The Lie You LIve

    Bro I need you to rub some of your poems on me I've been in a drought for the past couple of days! This is great and I agree with CherryBlossom that you hit the nail on the head!

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    Re: The Lie You LIve

    thanks bro i am glad you liked and i can give you a few idea's in a pm
    i am always thinking about life and thats where some of my stuff
    comes from because what could be better than a poem on how
    life really is
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Lie You LIve

    Very cool poem. Yeah, there are plenty of those people out there. You do good work, can't wait to read more.
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