KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR

I wrote this to my best friend some years ago. Is it good?

Since we were young,
you were never alone,
i stood there beside you,
all along...

When you needed me,
i left everything,
i wipped your tears,
i took away all of your fears.
I told you don't forget you'll never be alone,
you'll always have me,
leave you, i won't...

But now i find myself drowned in tears,
it's like you've forgotten all of those years,
i always stood beside you,
but you're not here for me,
and that's all that lies in here.
How come you tell me i'm your best friend,
but you never are even there,
when i needed you,
cause i'd been,
through...so many pain,
that i cannot, just walk away...

Sometimes i wanna call you,
but i know you won't be there,
so i can't help but to wonder,
if you even care...
all those times that we shared,
pictures it's all that i can stare.

I was so wrong to believe,
what we had was a real friendship,
but always when i think,
that you leave me stranded,
you come to listen me,
this thing get me confused,
when will i hear the truth from you?

It seems to me,
that i have never been alive,
this was just a dream,
someone bring me back to life,
now i realize,
that i have to open my eyes,
open them wide,
this is my last chance,
to be the wiser one...

I won't ever trust again, in your lies...

btw: we already solved it (:

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice

very awesome poem about freinds i went though this last week myself
and was really down you know but everything is fine now and i am glad i still have my friends. but the poems really expressed why freinds are important to everyone
and im glad you got it worked out. i liked this alot really and i hope you do another like this one

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Rave_Grip

Very awesome poem! Full of emotions! Damn you're a really deep poet Keep it up and you'll be the greatest poet on no tome -^ ^- It's really strong ...

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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR

i'm glad you got my point, i wanted to tell her through that poem that basicly actions worth more than words.
And definitly lucky me for keeping my best friend, idk what would i do without her...

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BlueFox1

I love the pain, the emotion, and the way it makes me think back to the friends who treated me the same way! Awesome poem! You got the message across and allowed everyone to see your true feelings about that situation at that current time!

Keep up the Good work
BlueFox1

°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u]

this poem is awesomez! i am in a current situation such as this one, i can feel ur pain, and i hope it ends as it did for you. I really like the way you write, you cut to the chase... straight to the point. I truly admire how you write.

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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR

well thank ya, i truly apreciate ur reply. If you need help with ur issue with ur friend, u can always pm me ^-^ an advice, just tell what you feel. no regrets.
my problem was that i usually hold my emotions inside, it's hard to know how i feel...

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