Bring the day,
Cause night is over.
Turn off the lights,
For darkness has come.
Let it rain,
Drenching this burning land.
A land, burning with lies.
No truths are told;
From masked goblins.
Just words spewing out;
Words with no meaning
Or words that needn’t be said.
Each sentence, our thoughts in disguise;
Hiding hidden intentions…no truth-only lies.
Each word giving off a portion of ourselves.
And each breath, pouring life into those pieces.
The breaths we exhale,
Emanates a part of our souls.
And as we live, we breath,
Spreading one soul to the next.
With the filthy souls they give off,
Souls filled with lies…
good job on exposing the filth of a liar. Like they're a disease to society. And thats excatly what they are too. Esspecially those who lie like its second nature, for no reason at all. Like reality isn't suitable so they want themselves and everyone else to live in their lies..... yuck....
I totaly agree with all Peach says (again lol), you've managed to show it all in a wonderful poem, one that makes you read it from the start 'till the end and think...
Another nice work by Seirika... I truly love your poems and will be waiting for the next one!!! ^^
woah...a wonderful poem...i would truly hate to be in such a land.. @.@and i think i have done 1 or 2 poems abt this...but this is way better than mine...
good job~! ^^
Thank you guys.^^
Peaches,that "disease" in today's society has no "cure."
Anywhere you go,you still have to live with them.
I'm always in love with your poems!!!!! They speak the truth about the subject mostly! Their written perfectly, their so interesting to read and so cool to read!!!! I hope to see more of your great work!!!! :D:
i need friends and some points to play the RPG!sorry for disrupting but it whold be nice if one of you be my friend one of you is already my friend!just wanted to tell yall that and im trying to make a long paragragh so i can git some points!