Lies

Seirika · Jul 16, 2007, 07:26 AM

Bring the day,
Cause night is over.
Turn off the lights,
For darkness has come.
Let it rain,
Drenching this burning land.
A land, burning with lies.
No truths are told;
From masked goblins.
Just words spewing out;
Overflowing.
Words with no meaning
Or words that needn’t be said.
Each sentence, our thoughts in disguise;
Hiding hidden intentions…no truth-only lies.
Each word giving off a portion of ourselves.
And each breath, pouring life into those pieces.
The breaths we exhale,
Emanates a part of our souls.
And as we live, we breath,
Spreading one soul to the next.
A plague
Contaminating everyone,
With the filthy souls they give off,
Souls filled with lies…

*Peach_follows* · Jul 16, 2007, 09:07 AM

good job on exposing the filth of a liar. Like they're a disease to society. And thats excatly what they are too. Esspecially those who lie like its second nature, for no reason at all. Like reality isn't suitable so they want themselves and everyone else to live in their lies..... yuck....

*Lasura* · Jul 16, 2007, 09:27 AM

I totaly agree with all Peach says (again lol), you've managed to show it all in a wonderful poem, one that makes you read it from the start 'till the end and think...

Another nice work by Seirika... I truly love your poems and will be waiting for the next one!!! ^^

*RayMe* · Jul 16, 2007, 09:30 AM

woah...a wonderful poem...i would truly hate to be in such a land.. @.@and i think i have done 1 or 2 poems abt this...but this is way better than mine...
good job~! ^^

Seirika · Jul 16, 2007, 09:44 AM

Thank you guys.^^
Peaches,that "disease" in today's society has no "cure."
Anywhere you go,you still have to live with them.

KuwiRules145 · Jul 16, 2007, 10:13 AM

I'm always in love with your poems!!!!! They speak the truth about the subject mostly! Their written perfectly, their so interesting to read and so cool to read!!!! I hope to see more of your great work!!!!

cbs81 · Jul 16, 2007, 12:55 PM

i need friends and some points to play the RPG!sorry for disrupting but it whold be nice if one of you be my friend one of you is already my friend!just wanted to tell yall that and im trying to make a long paragragh so i can git some points!

Jul 16, 2007, 07:26 AM	#1 (permalink)
Seirika Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Somewhere over the RAINBOW Posts: 152 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,700	Lies Bring the day, Cause night is over. Turn off the lights, For darkness has come. Let it rain, Drenching this burning land. A land, burning with lies. No truths are told; From masked goblins. Just words spewing out; Overflowing. Words with no meaning Or words that needn’t be said. Each sentence, our thoughts in disguise; Hiding hidden intentions…no truth-only lies. Each word giving off a portion of ourselves. And each breath, pouring life into those pieces. The breaths we exhale, Emanates a part of our souls. And as we live, we breath, Spreading one soul to the next. A plague Contaminating everyone, With the filthy souls they give off, Souls filled with lies… __________________ Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
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Jul 16, 2007, 09:07 AM	#2 (permalink)
Peach_follows Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,026 Thanks: 42 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 2,204	Re: Lies good job on exposing the filth of a liar. Like they're a disease to society. And thats excatly what they are too. Esspecially those who lie like its second nature, for no reason at all. Like reality isn't suitable so they want themselves and everyone else to live in their lies..... yuck.... __________________ Who needs a spray can, when you're a femmebot? http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt
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Jul 16, 2007, 09:27 AM	#3 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,866 Thanks: 56 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 49,182	Re: Lies I totaly agree with all Peach says (again lol), you've managed to show it all in a wonderful poem, one that makes you read it from the start 'till the end and think... Another nice work by Seirika... I truly love your poems and will be waiting for the next one!!! ^^ __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Jul 16, 2007, 09:30 AM	#4 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Lies woah...a wonderful poem...i would truly hate to be in such a land.. @.@and i think i have done 1 or 2 poems abt this...but this is way better than mine... good job~! ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Jul 16, 2007, 09:44 AM	#5 (permalink)
Seirika Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Somewhere over the RAINBOW Posts: 152 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,700	Re: Lies Thank you guys.^^ Peaches,that "disease" in today's society has no "cure." Anywhere you go,you still have to live with them. __________________ Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
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Jul 16, 2007, 10:13 AM	#6 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Lies I'm always in love with your poems!!!!! They speak the truth about the subject mostly! Their written perfectly, their so interesting to read and so cool to read!!!! I hope to see more of your great work!!!! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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cbs81 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: ? Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: -37	Re: Lies i need friends and some points to play the RPG!sorry for disrupting but it whold be nice if one of you be my friend one of you is already my friend!just wanted to tell yall that and im trying to make a long paragragh so i can git some points!
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