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  1. Jul 16, 2007 07:26 AM #1
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    Lies

    Bring the day,
    Cause night is over.
    Turn off the lights,
    For darkness has come.
    Let it rain,
    Drenching this burning land.
    A land, burning with lies.
    No truths are told;
    From masked goblins.
    Just words spewing out;
    Overflowing.
    Words with no meaning
    Or words that needn’t be said.
    Each sentence, our thoughts in disguise;
    Hiding hidden intentions…no truth-only lies.
    Each word giving off a portion of ourselves.
    And each breath, pouring life into those pieces.
    The breaths we exhale,
    Emanates a part of our souls.
    And as we live, we breath,
    Spreading one soul to the next.
    A plague
    Contaminating everyone,
    With the filthy souls they give off,
    Souls filled with lies…

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
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  2. Jul 16, 2007 09:07 AM #2
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    Re: Lies

    good job on exposing the filth of a liar. Like they're a disease to society. And thats excatly what they are too. Esspecially those who lie like its second nature, for no reason at all. Like reality isn't suitable so they want themselves and everyone else to live in their lies..... yuck....
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  3. Jul 16, 2007 09:27 AM #3
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    Re: Lies

    I totaly agree with all Peach says (again lol), you've managed to show it all in a wonderful poem, one that makes you read it from the start 'till the end and think...

    Another nice work by Seirika... I truly love your poems and will be waiting for the next one!!! ^^

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    Re: Lies

    woah...a wonderful poem...i would truly hate to be in such a land.. @.@and i think i have done 1 or 2 poems abt this...but this is way better than mine...
    good job~! ^^
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  5. Jul 16, 2007 09:44 AM #5
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    Re: Lies

    Thank you guys.^^
    Peaches,that "disease" in today's society has no "cure."
    Anywhere you go,you still have to live with them.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
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    Re: Lies

    I'm always in love with your poems!!!!! They speak the truth about the subject mostly! Their written perfectly, their so interesting to read and so cool to read!!!! I hope to see more of your great work!!!!
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  7. Jul 16, 2007 12:55 PM #7
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    Re: Lies

    i need friends and some points to play the RPG!sorry for disrupting but it whold be nice if one of you be my friend one of you is already my friend!just wanted to tell yall that and im trying to make a long paragragh so i can git some points!
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