Lies Shot Love

Here's another song/poem that I just wrote.It's pretty sad and sorry if it's a bit long again.Just please read it,i'm sure you'll love it..hopefully lol Anyway please comment and thanks for reading :)

Title-Lies Shot Love


You promised me so many things
But look at what your doing to me
I cry myself to sleep everynight
Because I wont be seeing your face,tonight...

"Look at what you've done"

I know that you wont be coming here tonight
You'll probably be at her place just like every other night
You tell me you love me,but that's probably a lie
You say that you want to be with me forever more,but it's just a pack of lies!

"Your love for me is nothing but lies"

I gave you everything and all of me
I'm so tired of all of your lies
I tried so hard to be what you wanted me to be
But I got nothing in return,nothing but a broken heart...

"Your lies and false promises have hurt me so deeply"

You've betrayed my heart and trust
I don't know how much longer I can do this
Your eyes and voice haunt me,even in my dreams
Your lies are tearing me up all inside!

"I'm dieing cause of all of your lieing"

I can't take this any longer
Your lies are running out
I can't stand the sight or thought of you with her
Your lies and treachery have pushed me overboard...

"I want be blind to your lies,No more"

I have to escape from you and your lies
Even if it means I have to run and hide
I don't belong here anymore
I've got to escape those burning lies!

"Your so called love is nothing but lies"

I'm sorry that I could never be what you wanted
That's why tonight the lies will end
My love for you will be dead,once again
Tonight it will all end...

"Because tonight,I will leave this place"

I lay in our bedroom and think of you
I can't take the pain and the heart ache,No more
I pick my choice weapon,which is a gun
I hold it to my heart and close my eyes
Tears fall from my eyes,as I whisper...

"I will always love you,Goodbye"

I pull the trigger and scream in pain
I fall to the floor,holding my wounded heart
You walk in on me and just stare in shock
I look up at you and just smile...

"Even though your love for me is all lies.I still love you.And I wanted to say..."
"Goodbye"...

you had me hooked all the way to the end and i have felt
like that once and it wasnt a good feeling the humialtion
the depravity and the smugness of the one who betrayed
me thats what this poem screams out. exxcellent poem
i cant wait to read another

Thanks Big Bro :) I'm happy that you liked it :) And i'm sorry 2 hear that you've felt like this before.

OMG!!!! Another one!!! I love your work!!! Please tell me your songs are on a cd and I can have one?!

Thank you soooooooooo much HieisLove :) That's it,i've got 2 hug ya *hugs* :)
I wish that they were,but hopefully 1 day they will be :)

whoa....................that sounded a lot like a story...........you could turn that into a story......................but it was really good..............

Thank you sooooooo much Bro :) I would but i'm no good at writting storys for some reason lol

You are GOOD! I like your poems!