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    Lies Shot Love

    Here's another song/poem that I just wrote.It's pretty sad and sorry if it's a bit long again.Just please read it,i'm sure you'll love it..hopefully lol Anyway please comment and thanks for reading

    Title-Lies Shot Love


    You promised me so many things
    But look at what your doing to me
    I cry myself to sleep everynight
    Because I wont be seeing your face,tonight...

    "Look at what you've done"

    I know that you wont be coming here tonight
    You'll probably be at her place just like every other night
    You tell me you love me,but that's probably a lie
    You say that you want to be with me forever more,but it's just a pack of lies!

    "Your love for me is nothing but lies"

    I gave you everything and all of me
    I'm so tired of all of your lies
    I tried so hard to be what you wanted me to be
    But I got nothing in return,nothing but a broken heart...

    "Your lies and false promises have hurt me so deeply"

    You've betrayed my heart and trust
    I don't know how much longer I can do this
    Your eyes and voice haunt me,even in my dreams
    Your lies are tearing me up all inside!

    "I'm dieing cause of all of your lieing"

    I can't take this any longer
    Your lies are running out
    I can't stand the sight or thought of you with her
    Your lies and treachery have pushed me overboard...

    "I want be blind to your lies,No more"

    I have to escape from you and your lies
    Even if it means I have to run and hide
    I don't belong here anymore
    I've got to escape those burning lies!

    "Your so called love is nothing but lies"

    I'm sorry that I could never be what you wanted
    That's why tonight the lies will end
    My love for you will be dead,once again
    Tonight it will all end...

    "Because tonight,I will leave this place"

    I lay in our bedroom and think of you
    I can't take the pain and the heart ache,No more
    I pick my choice weapon,which is a gun
    I hold it to my heart and close my eyes
    Tears fall from my eyes,as I whisper...

    "I will always love you,Goodbye"

    I pull the trigger and scream in pain
    I fall to the floor,holding my wounded heart
    You walk in on me and just stare in shock
    I look up at you and just smile...

    "Even though your love for me is all lies.I still love you.And I wanted to say..."
    "Goodbye"...
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    Re: Lies Shot Love

    you had me hooked all the way to the end and i have felt
    like that once and it wasnt a good feeling the humialtion
    the depravity and the smugness of the one who betrayed
    me thats what this poem screams out. exxcellent poem
    i cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Thanks Big Bro I'm happy that you liked it And i'm sorry 2 hear that you've felt like this before.
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    Re: Lies Shot Love

    OMG!!!! Another one!!! I love your work!!! Please tell me your songs are on a cd and I can have one?!
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    Thank you soooooooooo much HieisLove That's it,i've got 2 hug ya *hugs*
    I wish that they were,but hopefully 1 day they will be
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    Re: Lies Shot Love

    whoa....................that sounded a lot like a story...........you could turn that into a story......................but it was really good..............

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    Thank you sooooooo much Bro I would but i'm no good at writting storys for some reason lol
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    Re: Lies Shot Love

    You are GOOD! I like your poems!
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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