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    Cool Life

    My time always grows shorter
    As death only comes closer
    The past would be nice to revisit
    Memories now just a big blur

    Life is precious and bad to waste
    Some say, "What's the point?"
    And others keep savoring its taste
    Just remember ambition makes a difference

    There's always something to do
    You can't just sit around waiting to die
    Adventure is just around the corner
    Are you gonna let it pass by?

    Life is your own story
    Your moments fill the pages
    Like the times you got the glory
    And some you gained nothing

    Everyone has some regrets
    But you just gotta move on
    Life is as good as it gets
    So enjoy it while it lasts

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    Re: Life

    nice poem great job ^ ^..................

    Thankx Pyro, for this awesome sig! ^ ^




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    Re: Life

    awesome, sounds completely different than the ones I read a little while ago

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    Re: Life

    that was really awesome it rythmed pretty well, congrats man.

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    Re: Life

    Life is your own story
    Your moments fill the pages
    Like the times you got the glory
    And some you gained nothing
    Life like chapters in a book. Simply awesome. ^^ I hope you write more in the future.

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    Re: Life

    Not quite your best work. But I enjoyed it nonetheless.

    My time always grows shorter
    As death only comes closer
    The past would be nice to revisit
    Memories now just a big blur
    The first stanza was most intrigueing. You described the concept of life well. Good descriptions. To be honest there were a few statements which need some tweaking... but overall it was a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

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