Tano-kun

My time always grows shorter
As death only comes closer
The past would be nice to revisit
Memories now just a big blur

Life is precious and bad to waste
Some say, "What's the point?"
And others keep savoring its taste
Just remember ambition makes a difference

There's always something to do
You can't just sit around waiting to die
Adventure is just around the corner
Are you gonna let it pass by?

Life is your own story
Your moments fill the pages
Like the times you got the glory
And some you gained nothing

Everyone has some regrets
But you just gotta move on
Life is as good as it gets
So enjoy it while it lasts

B.a.n.g.B.a.n.g.

nice poem great job ^ ^..................

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Rei_unit00

awesome, sounds completely different than the ones I read a little while ago

ketaro

that was really awesome it rythmed pretty well, congrats man.

-Pocky-

Life like chapters in a book. Simply awesome. ^^ I hope you write more in the future.

Reese

Not quite your best work. But I enjoyed it nonetheless.

The first stanza was most intrigueing. You described the concept of life well. Good descriptions. To be honest there were a few statements which need some tweaking... but overall it was a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

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