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    thats true TD and glad you understood and you right about the BS
    it does get old
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    That was the best of the best and i couldnt put it any better
    so you just keep up the good work.
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    than you i was hoping everyone liked it though it was a but dark
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    good job...............cup holder.........................it was very dark.............but i found the set up of the stanzas very complicated..............but other than that it was good.............

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    thanks i had problems with that becuase i really idnt know where to end each or how to expaling the situaion in that verse i tried but i still need work on it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life !!

    I like this one.. well written.. the poem implies one wandering on through life, enduring pain and suffering, but doesn't really care enough of himself to mind the pain and suffering he's going through.. It's a bit of a self-destructing type of attitude twards the events happening around them.. Though he doesn't apply the negative to himself, he doesn't whine about it or care what consequences those events have on him...

    Sorry.. I may have just repeated myself twice in that rant >.<
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    Re: Life !!

    it's the perfect lengt, the letters were just beinging to run together btu they hadn't quite yet :d. lol, no, it's really good.

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