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    Life

    This is Life
    This is what i know (Chorus)

    This is what i know
    Its like melting snow

    Bullshiet, u play wid my life, when u played wid my money,
    Thats It! one false move, one more move, i will shoot u honey.

    Hard head motha fukkas talk so much SHIT!!
    Now u will see my fists glow, and all it takes is 1 HIT!!

    This is Life
    This is what i know

    my whole life just flash before me
    how stupid i was to see
    that u were playing me
    and these bitches love bad boys who call themselves G

    Life rushes like a train
    i went through Oblivious shiet, u didnt see me complain

    BUT now its different, no more remorse
    You cant even talk back, its like u fuked a horse

    I was never a quiiter
    I flowed like river

    Lies, lies, and lies all i got
    and u think u are hot
    dont **** wid me, cuz u are not

    This is Life
    This is what i know

    people betray,
    You dont know wat shiet they say
    That is why, u gotta ride yur life
    You gotta push, push it to the limit, if u wana strife.

    >>>>put yourself on the line, and u will be fine.

    the world is yours, and there will be millioon moree<<<<
    Last edited by wangwang; Sep 12, 2006 at 08:49 AM.

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    Wangwang strikes again! Dude this is awesome! The song is fierce! Awesome word and great way to let that anger out in a song! Awesome job!

    BlueFox1

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    Re: Life

    i will put my stuff on now once in a while

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    Re: Life

    Well, a few spelling erors. Hmmm, your style is really different! Which makes it appealing. And there's actual punctuation!

    I'm not fond of the subject you write, nevertheless, there is a way for you to add descriptive imagery into it. I'd love to read some of your work if you had analogies, metaphors, and all kinds of wonderful literary devices in your work.
    Last edited by Kasai; Sep 14, 2006 at 04:47 PM.
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    lol i am not a poet, thats what i feel like saying

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    So, you're not a writer? I'm not understanding some of the members here at AO. You periodically post poems, songs, and writings... Yet, you dont call yourself a writer? Well, what the hell are you? A person who just writes?

    Take a look at these definitions of a writer:

    writ‧er [rahy-ter] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
    –noun 1. a person engaged in writing books, articles, stories, etc., esp. as an occupation or profession; an author or journalist.
    2. a clerk, scribe, or the like.
    3. a person who commits his or her thoughts, ideas, etc., to writing: an expert letter writer.
    4. (in a piece of writing) the author (used as a circumlocution for “I,” “me,” “my,” etc.): The writer wishes to state….
    5. a person who writes or is able to write: a writer in script.
    6. Stock Exchange. someone who sells options.
    7. Scot.. a lawyer or solicitor.
    But you're a damn writer. May not be a poet, but you most definitely are a writer. Poetry is not the only literary subject that has rhetorical devices. >.>

    That's right, I brought a vocabulary out on your ass. I want AO writers to actually know about what theyre writing about. -sigh- Sorry, I'm ranting now. Forgive me, and hopefully I helped one person see the damn light of day.
    Last edited by Kasai; Sep 14, 2006 at 04:48 PM.
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    yo i know what a writer is aiite, i dont time to think of metaphors, i write what i feel as u said "a person who commits his or her thoughts, ideas, etc., to writing"

    yeaa that doesnt mean it needs metaphors, or literary devices watever, they appear by themselves, if u relly know how what i mean. latez

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    Re: Life

    Yea, i hear ya bro...Your friends will always be behind you too.
    If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life

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