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    Red face ???Life??????

    When I look beyond the horizon,
    I realized that soon I would be gone.
    I realized, as I live I get stronger,
    However, I’d soon die and become nothing.
    I am but a dust on the wind;
    Becoming what I once was,
    Part of the earth, in all it’s glory.
    Going back to where I belong;
    To tip the scale of Good and Evil.
    Be part of my initial destiny.
    I always knew it would come to this,
    But I never knew it to be this near.
    The end was near; I had to leave.
    Leave everything that I hold dear.
    Some are just material possessions;
    Some, people who seem to care.
    What happens after this……………
    Getting out the Lion’s Lair?
    …………No one knows………….




    Hoped u liked it!
    Life's short so have a laugh about it

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    Re: ???Life??????

    This poem has a deeper meaning hidden within it and I want to figure it out! Keep up the good work seeing as this is your first poem here! Looking forward to more of your work!

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    Re: ???Life??????

    it had spunk thats for sure, good job with the metaphors and wording.
    i did enjoy it, keep up the good work and i hope to see more
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    Red face Re: ???Life??????

    Thanks guys i didn't think ne1 would even read it.
    ..... ummm... Bye!
    Life's short so have a laugh about it

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