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    Newbie nalevankomichael is just another face in the crowd nalevankomichael's Avatar
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    Life

    The way of life is good and the way you see it is even better.
    I cannot do anything but help u out in life if you have a problem ask me.
    When there is a dought in our mind then try to find it inside.
    Where are u in life? Where will you be in ten years? Only you can decide.

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    Re: life

    This is nice and sweet but short... it really asks for something more. I really like the second line for it tells how I feel about everyone...
    You should really post more... Once you do that you'll find it easier to talk to people here and you'll have much more ideas for nice poems like this one (I know from my experience)

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    「Someone」 Goo Slasher Champion, Fish Kill Champion, Rapid Motion Champion, Cell-Out Champion, Sober Santa 2 Champion, Flower Girl Champion KuwiRules145 is off to a good start KuwiRules145's Avatar
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    Re: life

    Thats a greeat poem. It seems so beautiful like flying in the wind but I got to admit that it was short but it was great. I hope to see more in the future!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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