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    Life

    Time is flying by
    Your life isn't endless
    Everyone will die
    Important things will depend on your choices

    When I'm old and grey
    I'll forget who I am
    I won't know night from day
    To remember, I'll try to do what I can

    I'll honor my family name
    Love it, praise it, embrace it
    Because life isn't a game
    You always need to treasure it

    Before I die
    I'll leave behind a legacy
    My family will cry
    And they'll always remember me
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    Re: Life

    life truly is to short and not enough is given
    to most for one reason or the other so it should
    be cherished like it was your last because it could
    be you never know.

    i liked this poem for the fact you describe how
    people live grow old and feeble then die , its sad
    but truthfull and i like that awesome poem.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life

    life...uhhh. yea life. never really thought about it. Thought I think after its over there will be a better one afterwards.lol

    just a thought...but hey, i like the poem though, it was well organized

    Thanx Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Life

    thanks, i was bored. thats why i wrote it. i wrote it like two weeks ago.
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    Re: Life

    i like that poem, it was cool, u are very creative i would like to see more.

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    i'll try to come up with more. i'll have to think on that one
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    Re: Life

    it is very insperational i really look up to it in different ways.

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    Re: Life

    Hmm... a nice poem... different... I really like it... makes one think... I like how you've written it too... *reads again* actually it's really good... a great work here dragonman... really good... I'm almost jelous ^^

    And I really enjoyed reading it and I too will be looking forward for the next one... I'm always glad when a new writr shows up ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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